Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Chain Writing- Love over the Status

Long ago, there lived Erin and Prince in the village. The Prince's name was Chris. Erin was a servant of Mr.Klothe, who made a clothes for the loyal family , like the King. Mr.Klothe made a cloth for the prince Chris. He ordered Erin to deliver to Chris. When she went to the castle, there was Chris right in front of her. He fell in love immediately because she was so beautiful. She fell in love,too. So they dated secretly in the backyard of the castle or market. They loved each other deeply. But when they told their love to Chris's parents. they were opposed to their love because she was an orphan and servant. So Chris's parents locked his room. There were guards who protected Erin from coming to the castle. But she was so smart. She lied to Mr.Klothe and said that Chris wants clothes from him. He believed it and made it. He called to the castle and said that there will be a servant to deliver Chris's clothes. Erin covered her face and went there. Chris noticed that she is Erin. When the guards went out from his room, they escaped with a ladder secretly. Also they made a trick. They chose one guard who was similar to him, ordered to wear that clothes and sleep. Parents noticed that he escaped when he disappeared. So they lived in a house that is in valley to not found. Many years later, Chris's parents allowed them to marry because they knew that Chris and Erin loved so much. They became King and Queen. They lived happily ever after. 

Friday, August 10, 2012

Ode

Dear Money...

I want to thank you for existing. I feel so convenient because of you. We can buy food, we can buy clothes, and we can buy a house. If I didn't have you, I cannot eat anything, I cannot wear anything, I cannot live in a house.

I will tell you about a story when I didn't have you. The day was so hot that ice melt easily.  I really wanted to eat ice-cream. But I noticed that I didn't think of you! And I didn't pack you. I was so regretful. When I turned around, there was a friend who packed you. And she bought me ice-cream with you. I was so thankful to you and my friend.

Now I know that you are a good friend to me. I cannot even think about the world without you. You make our world good or bad. You make our world bright or dark. You make our world rich or poor. You are so important in our world.

Because of you, we can have convenience, because of you, we can s\be happy, because of you, we can enjoy. Do not be afraid to go out of society, do not leave me, do not leave our world. Please do live for me, do live for our family, do live for our world. That is my only request of you. Thank you and please do not leave our world.

Sincerely, Grace

Reflective Essay on ''Spring"


      Have you ever hurt someone's mind? Or not respect other's mind? Now I'm going to talk about 'Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter, and Spring' video. There is a child and monk in the mountain. One day, the child tied rock to animals and monk saw that. So monk tied rock to the child. And the child was sorry to the animals. I think the child realizes that we should not bother the animals and how painful it is. Many boys disjoint many insects like dragonflies. Then I want to tell them "If you were an insect, how would you feel?" We should think from the other side. 
  
       There are some situations related to this video in my life. Now I am living in dormitory with 5 friends. But we often fight. I will tell you about the first fight. Iris is in class 16. So she went to addition debate class in self-study time. When the self-study time over’s, bell rings. We were concerned about Iris. And after the bell rang, we just ran up to the cafeteria. After we ate milk and bread, Iris came. And we noticed that we forgot Iris. She was furious that we abandoned her. And she didn't want to say anything and listening to anything. She just waits for an apology. We were so furious because that was the third time to just wait for an apology not listening to our words. So every room mates were angry. However, if we think from the other side, it would be solved. Iris will listen to us and forgive us. Then we will not be that furious. 

        There is another situation. In my school, I'm a class president. So I should catch noisy students and check if students handed in the homework. But some boys want me to not check the homework and not catch noisy students. Even they bother me from studying. It is so annoying. But when I don't catch students and check homework, teacher will be angry at me. Also our class would be the worst class in our school because there would be so many noisy students and not do homework. Then what can I do? I want them to think my situation. Then there would be no fight between me and the boys. 

        Lastly, I have a younger sister. Her name is Amy. I often fight with her. She does mischief. Like hit me and hide. It makes me so annoying. Especially, when I'm studying, she shouts at me and I shout at her too. But when we understand each other, we would not. She will not annoy me because she would know that I'm studying and should not be bothered.

        I learned the lesson 'Put oneself in a person's shoes'. It means we should think other people and act. It is very important to live this society. There were some situations including fight with roommates, boys teasing me, and fighting with younger sister. We should think of putting oneself in other's shoes. Then we can understand each other. So fight will disappear. It leads to happy world. Please think 'Put oneself in another person's shoes' as a key to make a happy world. 

Friday, August 3, 2012

Diamante Poem

Olympics
Drastic Impassioned
Exciting Shouting Enjoying
Sports Game  Soccer Game
Playing Cheering Enthusing
Cheerful Red
World Cup

KONY2012


     Do you know KONY 2012? Many people would know about KONY 2012. Joseph Kony is a bad guy in Uganda. He is a worst criminal chosen by ICC. He is a leader of LRA, Lord's Resistance Army. He kidnaps children and he makes boys to kill their parents girl to be comfort women. But 99% of the people in the world don’t know who Joseph Kony is. So 3 students went to Uganda in 2003. And they met Jacob who was kidnapped by Kony. Jacob wanted to die. So they made a film and they made the 'Invisible Children'. KONY 2012 on YouTube, so many people in the world watched that. Someone say that making criminals become famous is not good. But it is good. 

      Primarily, we need more attention. For example, we cannot know about Dokdo when the media doesn't tell us. Now all Koreans know about Dokdo and we work hard to protect Dokdo. But what if we didn't know about Dokdo well, it could be a Japanese territory. So we need the attention from others. For example, there was a criminal who kidnapped children in city. And police showed the name and his picture to citizens who lived nearby the accident place because citizens have to protect themselves from criminals. And get away from the criminal. It is important. When all people know about him, they will protect themselves or get away.

      Moreover, we can arrest faster when people cooperate. Let's think about that all the people in the world know about KONY 2012. They would tell where Kony is because he cannot escape to the area where there is no human. For example, in Japanese colonial era, Japanese police let people know about Kim Koo who was the criminal at Japanese sight. And he arrested fast. Like this, we should let many people know about criminals. 

      Last but not least, politicians will help to arrest criminals. Like KONY 2012, it becomes famous and government and politicians concentrated on those things. And they sent an army to Uganda. So the club 'Invisible Children' is working easier with an army. And the army is finding Joseph Kony, too. They are helping them because the government ordered to do that. 

      But there is an opposite side. They are saying that 'Criminals can escape in hard place to find. First action of criminals is to escape or hide. But if that video or information has gone to all over the world, every people would know about it. Then they cannot find a safe place to hide themselves. So we should make criminals become famous. 

      I strongly agree that we should make criminals famous. There are three reasons; more attention is needed, arrest them faster, and politicians' help. And I think Kony should be arrested because he did so many bad things to children. He should be punished and the children should escape from him. Making him famous is the best way to arrest him and guarantee children's safety.  

Thursday, August 2, 2012

The Amazing Spiderman review

The Amazing Spiderman is a hero movie by Marvel. I would give 8/10 points. 2 points minus because it is similar with before series. Peter Parker, Dr. Osborn is the same. But the only difference is that this movie, it has Lizard but before there was Green Goblin for the enemy.

Peter Parker was bitten by a spider that made by OSCORP company. He didn't have a father just uncle and aunt. His uncle dead by a robber's gun. Peter wanted to trace his father. Finding it, there was Dr. Osborn. And he found an equation then solved it. Osborn made medicine that makes power up and revive body part. Osborn was handicapped person so he put that into his body. He became a very large lizard. Peter became a spider-man and thought 'I have a responsibility to depose that lizard'. And he saved citizens from lizanrd and robbers. But police thought he is a bad man. Gwen Stacy is a girlfriend of Peter at the same time, she was a daughter of a police. Lizard wanted to spread this medicine by force. Police knew that spider-man is not a bad and helped him to that lizard. Gwen was making a remedy against poison in the OSCORP building. But lizard came to OSCORP building. Peter and Gwen's father came and fought with lizard. Peter saved Gwen and her father dead. When he spread a remedy against poison, lizard became Osborn. He was arrested. I think Peter and Gwen married. The story was really good and fun. I cryed when uncle and Gwen's father dead.It was so sorryed. It was a good time to watch this movie. It was fun. And I want to recommend to you guys. also actors are so pretty and handsome. i love this movie. You would not regret to watch it!
URL: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FpKPiHYJc54